Saturday, 2 January 2016

Ratburger Poem

I am writing a poem this week on a book called Ratburger by David Walliams

Zoe is a little girl,
with a very clever mind.
She's in danger by three people,
and one of them is blind.

She has a pet rat.
who's called Armitage.
who's almost been cooked,
in Burt's garage.

Sheila's with the crisps,
the usual prawn & cocktail.
Whenever Zoe smells it,
she turns very pale.

Tina was a bully,
to that poor sweet girl.
But now they're best friends,
like a shiny glamorous pearl.

7 comments:

  1. lovely poem did you come up with this by yourself or did you use another source?

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    1. I came up with it myself but i also used a rhyming dictionary!

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  2. I sometimes use Rhyming dictionaries for riddles,and poems they are great!

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  3. where did you find a rhyming dictionary?

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    1. I look up "rhyming dictionary" on the internet and the first one that come out is the one I usually use

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  4. amazing poem how did you come up with the ideas?? and did you like the book because i loved it?

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  5. It is a very well written poem! It's hard to make a comment!

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